山东高考英语作文及点评

今年山东首次采取新高考模式，写作部分的命题方式也有所创新。下面小编为大家总结整理了2020山东高考英语作文及点评，供大家参考。

第一节（满分15分）

假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：

1. 参加人员：

2. 跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下：

3. 活动反响。

注意：

1. 写作词数应为80左右：

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

第二节（满分25分）

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

The Meredith family lived in a small community.As the economy was in decline, some people in the town had lost their jobs. Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet. People were trying to help each other meet the challenges.

Mrs. Meredith was a most kind and thoughtful woman. She spent a great deal of time visiting the poor. She knew they had problems, and they needed all kinds of help. When she had time, she would bring food and medicine to them.

One morning she told her children about a family she had visited the day before. There was a man sick in bed, his wife, who took care of him and could not go out to work, and their little boy. The little boy —his name was Bernard—had interested her very much.

“I wish you could see him,” she said to her own children, John, Harry, and Clara. “He is such a help to his mother. He wants very much to earn some money, but I don’t see what he can do.”

After their mother left the room, the children sat thinking about Bernard. “I wish we could help him to earn money.” said Clara. “His family is suffering so much.”

“So do I,” said Harry. “We really should do something to assist them.”

For some moments, John said nothing, but, suddenly, he sprang to his feet and cried, “I have a great idea!I have a solution that we can all help accomplish（完成）.”

The other children also jumped up all attention. When John had an idea, it was sure to be a good one. “I tell you what we can do,” said John. “You know that big box of cornUncle John sent us？Well, we can make popcorn（爆米花）, and put it into paper bags, and Bernard can take it around to the houses and sell it.”

注意：

1. 续写词数应为150左右；

2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

写作部分启用新题型，突出综合性和创新性。新高考英语写作部分取消了短文改错题，保留了书面表达题，增加了读后续写题。书面表达题的分值由25分减至15分，读后续写题满分25分。读后续写题给考生提供一篇350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据该材料内容和所给段落开头语续写两段内容，长度为150词左右。考生所写的内容应与所提供材料有逻辑衔接，情节合理，结构完整。读后续写考查读写综合能力，给考生更多发挥想象力、展示写作水平的空间。同时，该题型倡导读写融合，在引导教学方面有着重要意义。